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Ungiven
Contributed by
April
on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My emotions start to flow
So unsure of where this could go
All I know is what I'm wanting
With every look your eyes are taunting
I want to meet all of your demands
I feel the hunger in your hands
I look in the mirror and see my face
This is such an unfamiliar place
I want so badly to give in
But I know we can't win
I don't know if I should
I would lose control right now if I could
I want you to release me
I want to show you everything you can't see
We'll forget, just tonite
Make it last, hold me tight
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April
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2003-01-04 13:00:00]
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Re: Ungiven
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 04:45:46 PM AEST
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| this is an amazing poem...i love it... |
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Re: Ungiven
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:22:01 PM AEST
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| I like your poem very good. |
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