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foolish games
Contributed by
monkeyluvingirl
on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 09:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It started as a conquest
I was so sure I would win
I'd make him fall in love
But I'd never fall for him
I never stood a chance
And I fell so ***** hard
He was like a gust of wind
Against me, a house of cards
I put my heart on the line
I let myself trust
When he told me he loved me
I thought surely he must
I feel so foolish
For he knew all along
What he wanted was revenge
And I was just his pawn
Now he's back in her arms
And I feel so alone
He never looked back
As he was running for home
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monkeyluvingirl
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2005-06-08 21:01:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: foolish games
(User Rating: 1 ) by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:02:16 PM AEST (User
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This was a great poem. But I am so sorry if this happend to you, I don't know why guys are such jerks. |
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Re: foolish games
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 11:04:45 AM AEST (User
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same thing has happened to me. he liked a girl b4 me, and after he dumped me, he went back to her. i swore to myself i wouldn't fall in love, but i did. and i never trust ppl,. but i started to trust him.
anyway, enough about me, this was an awesome write.
- Beth - |
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Re: foolish games
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 06:29:09 PM AEST (User
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this was a very good write. You maintained the flow and cadence very well, but most important to me was the subject of the write. Very well done, indeed. |
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