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new breath of life (love story pt 2)

Contributed by fallensilence on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

as i drift through happiness
listening to your voice and touching your face
my heart has sew iself once more
thinking about your eyes and the way you taste
i wasnt too sure i could find this place again
content even as i think about the loss i suffered then

i can't wait for the day to start over
so i can marvel in your beauty and bathe in your words
once more i feel my heart beat again.

now i remember what the vulnerablness was for
the sense of having everything that can be lost in a second
this is why i hate to sleep without her at night

the world could end but we'd still be comfortable in each others arms.

its starting to feel too much like before
i chose to make you my own
and the seperation is whats killing me

(i cant wait for the day to start over. )

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-01-04 12:20:00]
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Re: new breath of life (love story pt 2) (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM AEST
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This one is soooooo passionate....full of emotion and love.....this one pulls at the soul.....i love this one, and on to the ending of this one i shall go....this is a good write my friend ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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