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Dream World
Contributed by
UrAllEyeAm1205
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:29:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Do you see my world so fine,
With skies of purple and rivers of wine,
With cotton candy clouds so sweet?
This is the place that makes me complete.
Do you see my gingerbread home,
With candy cane chairs and a butterfly phone?
Those are the things that make me smile
I could sit and enjoy this for a long while
But then I break away from there
And come back to a world where you don't care
I sigh and push myself through another day
Until the next time I can fly away
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UrAllEyeAm1205
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2005-06-08 18:29:16]
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Re: Dream World
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by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:03:08 PM AEST
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Wow..another great write! I really enjoy reading your poetry, you express yourself so well!
Krystal |
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Re: Dream World
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by Lyn on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:16:44 PM AEST
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| Really cool. Easy to relate to. Good job |
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Re: Dream World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:04:55 PM AEST
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this is so amazing. i loved it. u xpressed ur feeling well. sorry though bout the situation.
hopes he notices u. |
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Re: Dream World
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by fearlessleader7 on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 03:20:21 AM AEST
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Awesome! The imagery is flawless!
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