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I don't need you anymore
Contributed by
Unbreakable
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:26:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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She can't make herself believe in a Saviour
When she's never seen a single soul saved
"Jesus, where the hell are you?" she asks,
"For me you say your life you gave?"
"If you're so perfect and beautiful," she thinks,
"Why make me so insignificant, so weak?
Why let everyone I love bring me down
and still expect it to be you I seek?"
In her world twisted with anger and hurt
So many emotions run through her blood
And she doesn't know what to believe anymore
If God could help her, in her mind he should
Abandonned by a mother, a brother and serenity
left alone to deal in her world of pain
She knows she should be thankful for what she has
But nostalgia's all she has to keep her sane
She believes that if there is a saviour
She hates him and everything he's for
Because that girl is me and her world is mine
And I don't need you anymore
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Re: I don't need you anymore
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by UrAllEyeAm1205 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:39:15 PM AEST
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wow...your right, Krystal. our poems are almost exactly alike. I really liked this one. I feel your pain. It was a good write...keep up the awesome work. if you wanna talk bout anything, message me or IM me on AOL/AIM @ DrowningH2Oovados or email me at goincrazy4u08@hotmail.com I'm here for ya, gurl. Don't ever believe your alone! :-)
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Re: I don't need you anymore
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by Lyn on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:11:47 PM AEST
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Awesome work. I really liked it. I have had the same thoughts and emotions. You did a great job of putting them on paper.
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