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A Little Slice of the Wrist
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:06:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Darkness creeps in,
On an innocent life,
A pure young infant,
Cursed with the strife,
Abuse so evil,
It haunted her dreams,
Depression so deep,
She plotted death schemes,
A little slice of the wrist,
To release her pain,
Just one wouldn’t hurt her,
One slice of the vein,
It was a way to keep control,
To keep her reputation,
In the darkness of her room,
She did her mutilation,
At first it was a simple thing,
Just once in a while,
But now she craved the vicious blade,
And held it with a smile,
Her friends would never understand,
They’d take her precious blade,
Her image would be shattered,
And she would slowly fade,
Her consciousness was clear now,
She gave her wrists a look,
‘One more cut’ she decided,
And that was all it took,
She wanted a big finale,
And that was what she got,
She sliced the last a bit too deep,
And now she’s left to rot.
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Re: A Little Slice of the Wrist
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by heartbroken4ever on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 07:57:16 PM AEST
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This will be me soon
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Re: A Little Slice of the Wrist
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 03:22:35 AM AEST
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| awesome, well done |
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Re: A Little Slice of the Wrist
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by Sad-one on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:26:30 PM AEST
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| this is all too familar for me, being a cutter myself. it hit some really close spots with me. I really felt the words come to me. this is an excellent poem id give it 100 stars |
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Re: A Little Slice of the Wrist
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by Lyn on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:06:00 PM AEST
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Absolutely awesome piece. I loved it. I wish more people wpuld be more open about their cuttin. I can really relate to this poem as a former cutter. Especially the part about no one understanding. Great job.
Lyn |
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Re: A Little Slice of the Wrist
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 05:19:36 PM AEST
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| this is a sorta of fimialar feeling but i have never cut. I feel the pain and i wonder about it . But i do understand where you are coming from b/c i feel the same. |
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Re: A Little Slice of the Wrist
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by guiltycircles on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 05:47:35 AM AEST
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| awesome... you really worded the progression from the beginning of a deep depression to the end, suicide, well done |
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