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ALL HER LOVE
Contributed by
judasman
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:58:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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SHE'S SO SAD NOW
ALL HER LOVE HAS GONE
IT'S BEEN TAKEN AWAY
SHE CRIES PAINFULLY
"YOU'LL GET OVER IT"
THEY ALL SAY
THEY DON'T KNOW
DON'T FEEL THE SAME
SHE PRAYS TO GOD
THAT SOMEDAY SOON
SHE'LL JOIN UP AGAIN
WITH ALL HER LOVE
SHE CAN;T GO ON
EVERY MINUTE OF
EVERY HOUR OF
EVERY DAY
THE PAIN GROWS
IT'S KILLING HER
THE BLACK CROWD
MOURNS THE LOSS
"WE DIDN'T KNOW"
"WE DIDN'T FEEL THE SAME"
THEY ALL NOW SAY
SHE'S FREE OF HER TORMENT NOW
SHE'S FOUND PEACE
SHE'S FOUND ALL HER LOVE
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judasman
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2005-06-08 17:58:31]
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Re: ALL HER LOVE
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:16:19 PM AEST
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sad yet beuaitul a great write
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Re: ALL HER LOVE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 07:02:44 PM AEST
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| That's so sad but great none the less. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: ALL HER LOVE
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 08:06:50 PM AEST
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Awww this is really sad, but what a special poem...I can relate; I just had to put my girl down last year and she meant the world to me, and no, it really DOESN'T get any easier...Take Care.
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Re: ALL HER LOVE
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by judasman on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 07:57:26 AM AEST
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| Your actually being recognised for your writing and people are liking it. But i am the luckiest reader as i get to see all your work, its right here beside me and i've been looking to see which is the next best you could put on here. Im on here whilst your in work and i cant wait for you to come home. I love you so much xxxxxx Sarah xxxxxx |
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