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million shades of grey
Contributed by
boobiepeach
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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dark and light ears of await
death closeses in on the words of life
no birth of new but sylobals of before
mind wanders then stops at still
numb to light, pain is there
shreak of happieness
pain of the numb
clock ticks to the sound of your lie
black voice posses as not
birth of tears
death of sole
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boobiepeach
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2005-06-08 17:09:56]
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Re: million shades of grey
(User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:11:12 PM AEST
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This is really great! Everyone really slept on this one...Nice expression.
(Again though...the spelling!!) Keep it up!
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Re: million shades of grey
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:30:39 PM AEST
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The poem underneath all the misspellings is outstanding. The gross spelling mistakes turns off a lot of people and they just won't comment or rate. The poem I would rate a 4, the spelling minus 2. Work on that spelling. If you take the time to create beauty, it should be worth taking the time to do and present correctly.
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