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The face of death (El Diablo)
Contributed by
FigurelessShadow
on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:17:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ha ha ha,
There you are,
You're the devil,
El Diablo,
Aren't you?
You're standing all proud and happy,
You're twisted,
You're there,
In front of my eyes,
Are you there to take me away,
To leave me astray,
To shove me,
In an ashtray?
Am I past my time allready?
My heart beat is not steady.
Why are you looking down at me,
Smiling as if you are proud of me?
What have I done?
What have I done?
Copyright ©
FigurelessShadow
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2005-06-08 14:17:49]
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Re: The face of death (El Diablo)
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by Strawberry on
Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 07:00:30 PM AEST
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| this poem is really good.it seems like it has a rythem to it and its really cool. good job sammi |
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Re: The face of death (El Diablo)
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by princess_of_pain on
Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 07:07:24 PM AEST
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| i really really liked this poem. it has a good rhythm and was a nice read. great job! |
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