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Pain of Death
Contributed by
FigurelessShadow
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Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:52:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ouch...
I'm dying,
My heart is not being used,
Its only being abused,
It hurts,
I'm in so much pain,
Will I die?
Will you ever reply to my proposal?
It's pain,
Im dying,
It's pain,
I think.
Not once did you reply to my proposal,
You don't even care if I die,
Life is pain,
Death is pain,
I'm dying.
Ouch...
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FigurelessShadow
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2005-06-08 02:52:04]
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Re: Pain of Death
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:48:28 AM AEST
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Very unique write... I like it! I'm especially liking "life is pain"
welcome to the site! and keep up the good work!
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Re: Pain of Death
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:50:40 PM AEST
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emotions emotions throughout this poem, nicely done,and a big warm WELCOME TO YPDC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(((((((((((SOUTHERNBELLE))))))))))))))) |
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