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BEFORE SUNRISE

Contributed by Lovingcritters on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:51:26 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

BEFORE SUNRISE

'Tis early for many-not us,
About 4ish or 5 a.m. up we are,
'cause dogs are brainless!
They can't tell time, and if I make
them wait.....they sit and whine!
Soft white light shines on the skyline.....

The moon over head is alive,
I smell the early morning freshness,
another day to survive.
I hear the lone meadowlark call......
"Pretty bird do you see me?"
"Pretty bird do you see me?"

No color in my early morning day
Just haze grey, black silhouettes sway.
Can't quite make her out, Miss Robin
is busy,
Deep breaths I take filling my lungs
briskly.

Another beautiful day of life I welcome.
Delightful peace, early tranquility
Light breeze carries a slight chill of Autumn,
Longing for summer my soul waits calmly.

Soon the sunrise with her neon lights
Will shine beauteous colors like high flying kites.
Man will stir, his cars, trucks, airplanes navigate.
Complicated game of chess, each day
another stalemate?

Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 7, 2005

The little things?
The little moments?
They aren't little.

~John Zabat-Zinn~

"Sunrise Smiles!"

Copyright © Lovingcritters ... [ 2005-06-07 23:51:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:05:20 AM AEST
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Good write, mom.
It's usally a few hours after sun up that I sleep.
huggs, luv,
yobrat,
emy

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 01:35:54 AM AEST
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left me feeling pieceful
michelle

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 03:16:37 AM AEST
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Ah Yes indeed ConSue the early hours of the fresh morning where the birds greet the coming day. I too awake early and listen to the dawning of a new day. The first birds then the cars and the hum of traffic. I usually turn around and drop off to sleep again knowing that I do not have to get up but can have that luxury of another hour or two. Thank the Lord for retirement where my time is my own.Hugs and poetic love from Martha and Bernard.

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:50:06 AM AEST
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"I smell the early morning freshness to survive and sunrise with her neon lights Will shine beauteous colors like high flying kites"
I like this description....This is a very beautifully composed poem..
its lovely..lovely my dear Connie..:-) venkat

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:38:44 AM AEST
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What a lovely picture you paint w/ your words...a tranquil time indeed

Shari

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 06:47:33 AM AEST
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What a beautiful poem to start my day off!! (Even tho it's way after sunrise!!!)
Thank you for sharing this..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:54:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful and profound reminder of the charm of the early hours of the morning. and its virginal freshness.Promise of a new day and its opportunities.
Opportunities for young and old, poor and rich, free gift.
Oppoprtunities to get cracking with new tasks, joyfully!
Cracking new eggs, or those rotund things called zeroes and fill them with Juice.:) :) :) Oh joy!
Wonderful poem Consue.
Thanks for sharing the promise, and its abundant blessing!.
Warm, love
Elizabeth

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by grin69 on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful.

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 04:34:59 PM AEST
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ah i love the countryside. nature is a true artist. nice write, it allowed me to think back to when i used to go to the sand dunes with some friends. chris.

Re: BEFORE SUNRISE (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:53:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful and so very calming. Lovely picture words and music

love angelxxxxx

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