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Sleep: Seven Bucks
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:38:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Slipping back in
To mind and body
Finding the absence
Has not been unkind
Needing more room
Than the usual stay
Taking liberty of spaces
And stretching the walls
Not sure where it started
But I know the ins
Doing circles, not circuits
Both being equal in weight
Not sure where it ends
I know it don't matter
The journey of a vessel
Is a vessel for tales
Binding circles and cycles
and entertwining a twist
Making friends of enemies
Til the moon lies for sun
Starting over again
And wrapping some more
Tired constraints give way
Sleep is only seven bucks away
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2005-06-07 23:38:22]
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Re: Sleep: Seven Bucks
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by KayeRains on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 01:20:35 AM AEST
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Re: Sleep: Seven Bucks
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:55:31 PM AEST
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very well written. i liked the flow.
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