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Hey Cinderella
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hey Cinderella
I followed you here after the party broke
I watched you dancing
I stared at your ruby red lips as you spoke
If I startled you, I apologize
It’s not like me to let a precious jewel slip by
I just wanted to tell you, in words I haven’t yet found
That this miracle I feel, is not just my silly imagination messing around
Climatically erupting
I recall you from a long lost dream
I imagine you are even lovelier
As the morning sun breaks on the sheets draped over you
I want you to see me
Look into my eyes and dare call me a liar
If you believe me this once
I will cherish you forevermore, if you so desire
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-06-07 23:03:16]
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Re: Hey Cinderella
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:08:50 PM AEST
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| It reminds me of a romeo and juliet type of affection..i like it |
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Re: Hey Cinderella
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 09:58:09 AM AEST
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WOW. That's all I have to say...
Scorp. |
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Re: Hey Cinderella
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by gwenevere on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:20:30 PM AEST
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| A new variation on a theme.good work |
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Re: Hey Cinderella
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by jc18 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 04:32:20 PM AEST
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| It was simple, but somewhat powerful, because it gives you a warm fuzzy feeling on the inside and who doesn't like that. |
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Re: Hey Cinderella
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by brittaney on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:20:17 PM AEST
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i like this a lot! This is my kind of poetry!
Brittaney~ |
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