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After Prom
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Buttons, skin, a torn off shirt,
a first time but it doesn't hurt.
Hush.
Stop the talking, begin to blush.
Rush.
Instinct action, instant passing
from motion to motion,
never lasting
for more than a moment,
like last spring's fashion.
Pace quickens.
Race begins.
Contestants hurdle,
like kids in a wind.
Brace.
Impact, contact,
last seconds
of a lonesome pact.
Release eases
time untill it freezes,
a Kodak moment
of a thing that pleases.
Keep the memory
in a deep place,
for when it's done
all that's left is
a smiling face.
And sleep.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
... [
2005-06-07 19:52:42]
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Re: After Prom
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:06:17 PM AEST
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LMAO sounds as fleeting as a high school guy...haha. Nice job.
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Re: After Prom
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:11:16 PM AEST
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It always seems like the good time fly bye so fast, but the agonizing things last forever. Nice write.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: After Prom
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:35:20 PM AEST
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good write, my opinion on this subject is a lil flighty. well keep it up
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Re: After Prom
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by Serendippitty on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:32:23 PM AEST
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| gave me deja vu, kinda... (if thats how u spell it... haha) nice write, personally, i like it |
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