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I Can't Take It
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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That is it
I am done with this
I am through with life
Done fighting this strife
I can’t handle the pain
Any longer, I live in strain
I’m saying goodbye now
Don’t ask me why or how
It got like this
But I’m lost in abyss
Falling endlessly
Forever infinitely
Stuck in the darkness
Without forgiveness
I can’t take it any longer
I have not grown any stronger
I’m through with it
I can’t fight this
I’m picking up the knife
And ending this strife
Copyright ©
sprinter27
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2005-06-07 19:43:19]
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Re: I Can't Take It
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:56:44 PM AEST
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| i like this poem...my friend was goingthro this the fow of it it really good and rhymes are awesome and im sry if u were feel like that and whatever your going thro in life right now is to get you ready for teh future jsut hang in there ! geat write ! |
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Re: I Can't Take It
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by Zeldianus on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:10:48 PM AEST
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| I agree with the above; things will get better, i promise you that. |
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Re: I Can't Take It
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:39:52 PM AEST
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first off great write, truley moving and very emotional, a well captured feeling, but i must also tell u that u had better not do nething about this feeling or i will bring u back and then kill u agonizingly slow (or if u really feel like this then i will just leave u here to deal with it again) u r my bff and i will never let u go i dont care how stupidly stuborn u r too bad
kc
ps. great write |
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Re: I Can't Take It
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by GingerB on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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Emotions well captured.
Good write.
Ginny |
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Re: I Can't Take It
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by FigurelessShadow on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:50:10 AM AEST
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| wow, i fell the same way, trust me. Thanx for sharing that. I can think bout it now |
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