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Hole
Contributed by
Nixzy
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:41:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A deep cut inside my heart,
Begins to form a hole,
Deeper,
Wider,
The hole grows bigger.
My emotions start to pour out of this well shaped hole,
My life drained before me,
Depression,
Tears,
Hatred builds up inside as I start to lose you.
I cant take the pain and hurt,
Stretch,
Thins,
Opens,
This hole inside is killing me.
As I die I cry many tears of hatred for you,
As I’m lowered into the ground,
Into a hole,
A heart shaped hole,
Of hurt,
Despair,
The loss of you turned into your loss of me.
Copyright ©
Nixzy
... [
2005-06-07 19:41:00]
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Re: Hole
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:47:30 PM AEST
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i like it..... but it's sad. i'm sorry you have to put up with this. and please, try not to give up on life. try to fight it! please? wishing the best of luck to you!!!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work! |
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Re: Hole
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by Serendippitty on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:34:37 PM AEST
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a little too dark and sad for me
but i liked the wording and the feeling you put into it |
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Re: Hole
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by Cynic on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 08:00:43 PM AEST
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| i like. thanks for sharing. |
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