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Sugared Lies
Contributed by
jimmato
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Locked down
I said I loved you but you stayed free
Never promised anything but I thought you'd
Not laugh at me
I tried loving
I take it all back your ugly
I didn't ring
Don't throw your life away on nothing
Thought we'd be together but she
Wouldn't do it for me
I did everything
I'm in it for one last fling
When you tell me lies
Your so fat and bloated with contempt
When you tell me lies
I grow sick from sugared words yet I'm content
Never one to ask of your intent
Spun such tales we start the descent.
Slip away
The night seems young but's as old as time
Thought we'd stay the same forever
But you tried to become whats forgotten
Not to be trusted lest you steal the day
I take it all back
You're nothing
Copyright ©
jimmato
... [
2005-06-07 18:21:12]
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Re: Sugared Lies
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by c2b6s on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:37:51 PM AEST
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| I really like this song/poem. I would like to sing this to someone i know... |
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Re: Sugared Lies
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:38:05 PM AEST
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I love verses 1 & 3, they are hilarious. The song with a few minor changes would make a great song.
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Re: Sugared Lies
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:01:18 PM AEST
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LMAO---wow jim, some pretty scathing words here...lol I'd hate to break up with you!! I really like this; poem/song whatever it is, it's great.
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