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Final Goodbye
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:40:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm writing this to let everyone know how i feel.
And to ley you all know that i was for real.
I wasn't just joking when i said my last goodbye.
But you didn't actually believe that i would die.
Now that i can see down on you, i can see.
That all of you are putting the blame on me.
For your own mistakes of not listening to what i said.
And because of your mistakes i am now dead.
Six feet under ground and only fifteen years old.
I never knew the world could be this cold.
But hey i guess i was wrong but at least i admit it.
I mean at least i have the courage to say it.
Well i was just dropping by to say my final goodbye.
To all my family and friends, keep all your heads high.
~*Kay-Kay*~
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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2005-06-07 17:40:23]
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by jc18 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:54:05 PM AEST
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| I think for the most part this poem is true and that we all feel ignored and hurt sometimes to the point that we ask ourselves "Why even bother?" It's so much easier to let go rather then hang on. |
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by c2b6s on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:36:18 PM AEST
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| I can identify with this. Sometimes its easier just to give up |
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:03:38 PM AEST
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good poem. and i really feel like this, too. i try to hold on, but it is easier just to say goodbye. And i hope that you aren't saying goodbye. you better not! good work!!
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by jjones12 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:43:46 PM AEST
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you know the beaty of life is getting through the trials god gives you. it's easy to give up but hang in there.
=Jen= |
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