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Children
Contributed by
mindset
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:24:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Our youth our last expire
For them we seek what we have lost
To educate a place a road cross
Yet as we as them we never listen
But they hold the world expression
Words to youth listen to those expired
Old and bold lost untold we speak our words of reason
You dont see You carry the old's last sea
Your sail now mind set full gail
Shall we say you carry words of a bird old an flown
I say you hold the golden word
Dont throw it away cast it carefull
Our future now flows in the vein insaine
Many old have looked the mirror
For them of new be that reflection
Now the word lays down a place to reflect
Dont take advantage of the lake of pure suggest
Children I hope you listen
Time draws near its the age impression
To be the early only to forget now your old
Never forget the words of bold.
Copyright ©
mindset
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2005-06-07 17:24:16]
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Re: Children
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by jc18 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:03:12 PM AEST
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| It's a good poem with a good message, but I think it was a little hard to read, because the words didn't flow right. I think a poem should be simple for the mouth, but creative for the mind. |
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Re: Children
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by Iamyown on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 02:54:45 PM AEST
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| i like it alot it has a good message, and its put together with thought. i like the wording it makes you think, and thats the great thing about poerty it has no boundries so try to create one. i love it |
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Re: Children
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by mindset on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:29:49 PM AEST
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IamYown a man who to be listened who has found the right question who dont need no answer .......
Total to a man who see's real word life :)
And my friend............. |
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