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ROLL CREDITS
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Searching franticaly for a spot
to unload your fault, place it here
i'm the scapegoat, i'll cushion your fall
After the curtain call expires the crowd
leaves one and all, i'm there for your encore
I beckon to your call
High on your pedastal, at my expense
your there, God the madness I endured
intense pain, the guilt, I paid your fare
My head lowered, hung in shame, hating
myself, why do I withstand this hell, put
myself to the test, for your spotlight, my love,
your fame
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-06-07 12:51:43]
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Re: ROLL CREDITS
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 02:38:30 PM AEST
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*applauds* Encore! Encore!! Nicely done.
Scorp. |
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Re: ROLL CREDITS
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:30:44 PM AEST
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Well written poem and deep feeling and emotions put forth you'll be ok in time one day at a time is all u can do, wish u well my friend . . .
Ben : )
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Re: ROLL CREDITS
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by Poser on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 12:18:24 AM AEST
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| Pretty good, lots of commas though. I haven't decided if that is good or not... |
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Re: ROLL CREDITS
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 02:19:35 PM AEST
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| wow, i liked it. the last stanza was powerful. you did a great job. |
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