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Burn with Hate
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:31:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Turn your emotions against me.
Im in the wrong.
Drown myself in your song.
I dont want to feel,
Your the only one who doesn't see
I try to show,
But you get the wrong impression
The good in my heart, You'll never know
See me as a hell raiser, mentally insane.
Put down your rose tinted glasses
Feel the worlds tears, its crying out in pain.
I can't go on living in my own bliss,
Loving you is a hit and miss
I love you sister, but you make me burn with hate.
Two totally different people
Our paths crosses, intangled, Its written in our fate.
But our differences tear away,
The only hope to see
Everything we've been meaning to say.
I'm not sure what I'm to do.
I can't follow you anymore.
We clash, We irratate
We burn with hate.
Kate Ecklund
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2005-06-07 11:31:39]
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Re: Burn with Hate
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:39:23 AM AEST
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| Very pain and anger wracked write! I especially like the ending.. very strong! dw |
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Re: Burn with Hate
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by sride686 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 06:07:12 AM AEST
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| As Dw said it did have a strong ending but I am sorry to hear you cant get along with her. Family can be the worst thing in your life for they already have your heart and love so it is fare to easy for them to rip it out. They are so close that everything they do effects you and angers you. I wish I could hug you and comfort you when times like this are alive in your life. I know that most of the time I’m feeling down over here in Iraq I just wish I had someone to hold and get lost in their arms and forget all the pain in my life. Take care and your in my thoughts and I hope your heart can find some rest….Steve |
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