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Eternal Sleep
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:36:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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you lie to me
i cover my eyes
you strike again
i break down and cry
you hurt me bad
i feel broken heart
you tear it out
im torn apart
you make me weak
i try to scream
you cover my mouth
im ripped at the seams
you slice my arm
i watch the blood
you make my tears
i watch them flood
you have a knife
i cringe and i weep
you stab me now
pierce my heart, eternal sleep
you bury my body
set lillies on my grave
with all of your lies
me you could not save
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:36:36 AM AEST
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Jenny, another amazing write. I know that type of poem and I agonize that you are in that state to write such poetry. Hugs to you, for I know there is nothing more I can do.
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:09:27 PM AEST
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| Jennie. I am sorry how things have changed for the worse. Your eloquent and visual description of your pain lets us into your heart. I don't necessarily believe it is better to have loved and lost... hang in there, my friend! |
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 02:04:38 PM AEST
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This is good! Love the expression, and it flows well too...
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Re: Eternal Sleep
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by GingerB on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:40:22 PM AEST
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Really touching write. My heart goes out to you.
Ginny |
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