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Famous Believer
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:53:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The Indian sun scattered like footsteps
leading down the corridor of my lungs
The breathe that I need to take
does not come without its price
A certain degree of reverence is maintained
within the scorn I conjured
The musical notes engulf the passionate flame
that douses, and so it wets its core
The mechanism used to control
the vast majority of compelled disruptors
The velocity in which I am lifted
and propelled like a falling meteor
A mutual understanding between the Buddha
and the monk who repents
The convictions for which I stand can be trampled on
by feet lost in the hunt for success
Forever in demand is the peace that eludes,
and the riches that produce this excess
Within the arts and words of the centuries,
an equilibrium deemed a necessity
Many generations before us
saw this civilization grow into its finest
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Re: Famous Believer
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:05:32 PM AEST
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I see lots of symbolism in this write, and coverage of several different topics as well. The true meaning sort of shrouded in secrecy, but nicely done all the same.
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Re: Famous Believer
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by Kittenfantastico on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 07:53:09 PM AEST
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| So so good! |
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