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Black Tears
Contributed by
ivoryA
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:41:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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black tears fall
because of black mascara
black tears fall
because of a loved one lost
black tears fall
because of a hard hit to the face
black tears fall
because no one cares at all
but most important of all
black tears fall
because we've lost it all
lost hope and love
joy and sorrow
sadness and regret
laughter and pleasure
we've lost every feeling
the world has ever known
black tears fall
because we have nothing left
no feelings at all
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ivoryA
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2005-06-07 09:41:35]
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Re: Black Tears
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by happynikki on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:46:09 AM AEST
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i liked it, and i and probably others can relate to it a lot...my favorite part was "black tears fall because we have nothing left no feelings at all" i can really understand where this comes from..well keep it up Much Love
~Nikki~ |
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Re: Black Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 06:26:11 PM AEST
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| I think this was a very good write. You maintained the flow and cadence very well, but most important to me was the subject of the write. Very well done, indeed. i can relate to this too, myself. |
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