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Pretty smiles towards the sun
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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in all my moments of despair
lights shine through and warm the air
i like the colours of dark sorrow
more like blue and deeper hollow
i saved myself from pills and pain
now i paint what's now the stain
i walk among the colours mixing
dabbing smiles to make frowns fixing
mop and wash the sky of blue
i touch the clouds and capture you
pretty smiles towards the sun
sparkling eyes that love in fun
i stroke her hair with my hand's eye
to seek the beauty that cannot cry
til the sun comes down..
til the sun comes down..
dw
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Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:36:12 PM AEST
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You have captured a fan with this poem. Even through pain and sorry and trials of life, we must still smile and do our best possible.
smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:55:51 PM AEST
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simplicity is best!
I love this poem..
your finesse is second to none..
and I love the echo of the last line..
wonderful..just wonderful!
B |
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Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:12:46 AM AEST
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This poem seems a beautiful work of art., with friendship shinning through. When I read this it's as if you are painting a portrait of your friend on canvas
Beautiful work
Will |
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Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun
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by Jocelyn on
Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 01:00:26 AM AEST
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| Something simple but deep meaning in the way the life moving. Thanks to you. |
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