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Too late
Contributed by
speed-of-sound
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:14:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Goodbye cage
Goodbye confusion
Goodbye death
Goodbye intrusion
I won’t be back this time.
Don’t forget who I was,
Just remember who you were
Although I know this was all my cause,
It’s too late to repair.
I hope you understand what I have to do
I know I never helped
Or cared enough for you.
Hello escape
Hello clarity
Hello life
Hello serenity
And all that waits for me.
Please forgive me
For always having to learn the hard way
I’m so sorry
Life is like a ballet
The ending is inevitable…
I know you think you can help,
But it’s much too late
You know I love you
But I’m your foolish king,
Awaiting checkmate.
Copyright ©
speed-of-sound
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2005-06-07 06:14:49]
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Re: Too late
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:20:00 AM AEST
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| Too often suicide poetry is just ugly, but this doesn't focus on the cutting or bleeding and though it may sound weird is kinda nice |
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Re: Too late
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:25:48 AM AEST
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"I hope you understand what I have to do
I know I never helped
Or cared enough for you"
I like how you formatted this poem, and the lines above strike out at me. Nifty little ending, too. (^_^)b |
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Re: Too late
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by happynikki on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:53:18 AM AEST
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it's so different compared to all the other suicide poetry...but i like it...and i can still understand..my favorite part was
"I know you think you can help,
But it?s much too late
You know I love you
But I?m your foolish king,
Awaiting checkmate."
keep up the writing..Much Love
~NikkI~ |
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