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this is why i love you
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:19:12 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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your hair is blonde
your eyes are blue
every body loves you
your smile is so white
you shine like the light
your voice is so deep
you make me sink so deep
you some times act like a fool
but mostly act cool
you look so good
your lips taste good
this is why i love you
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Re: this is why i love you
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:32:52 AM AEST
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don't like ending consecutive lines in the same word ... deep deep and good good.
Anyways, its nice. |
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Re: this is why i love you
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by aplsdka on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:41:39 PM AEST
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| you've tasted his lips? then i totally envy you. I love poems about paul. Write more. |
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