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broken chains
Contributed by
vampirelover
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:03:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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all my life
has been tied by chains
but now i'm getting older
and starting to break away
my minds getting brighter
as the older i grow
i love you
no matter how tight the chains
well, i realize that you care so much
but at some point i need to break away
and live my live
and my mistakes
for right now the chains are starting to rust
and at one point
my chains will be broken
and i'll fly away
my mind will be spoken
let the world see
what's played in my mind
from all those days
and all those times
the broken chains
will be untied
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2005-06-07 05:03:09]
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Re: broken chains
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:10:16 AM AEST
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good write.
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Re: broken chains
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:04:45 AM AEST
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Vampirelover
Very nice write the only thing I would like better is that it had more ryme. Good job.
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