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If only

Contributed by unfinishedheart on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:50:10 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry





If I only I could make you love me,I could finally feel whole,If I could only make you hug me,and never let me go.If I could make you smile,tell you how I feel,to look in your eyes and know this love is real..This raw emotion,my heart on my sleeve,if I bear you my soul-I know youll just leave.Can I be myself,no gimmics,no lies,will you tell me youll stay here-if I break your leash and ties?Will you love me in the morning,after all is done,will you stick around,finish what youve begun..or is that just that-youve had want-the conquest is over oh,how could you be soo blunt..could have told it to me softly,maybe whispered in my ear-no you had to run your ggame,and said what I wanted to hear.Will you tell all your friends about what we shared,how could I have been so blind,how could I have thought you cared?yes,they all warned me,but I brushed them aside.. in you I was looking for something-that I would never ever find.today I feel dirty,foolish,cheap and used-I feel like an object whos ego has been bruised..I look to my side,and see that your gone.unfamiliar surrounds,I know I dont belong.memories of you run through my head,I fell for the act-for every lie that youve said.so now its all over?whats done is done?what happened to love,to when two become one?what happened to our love song-that seemed it was stuck on repeat.all boundries are lost,hiding from defeat-what happened to the truth?not that it was told.I feel,like Ive been used,feel like Ive been sold.Will these tears forever stay in my eyes?memories of you and what we shared last night.To you it means nothing.nothing at all.what happened to the man that used to stand 10 feet tall?what happened to your charm,sense of humor that was so great?was all that just an act-why are you so fake.everythign I told you=none of it matered,all my hopes and dreams were suddenly shattered.one night and one night only..If I could only love me,if only if only..




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Re: If only (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:59:17 AM AEST
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whoa...you should llike make this more ereadable...its one big paragraph


Re: If only (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 08:56:29 PM AEST
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this is good .i like it . wish i could write something si inspiring.




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