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Unblemished like stars
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:01:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking hand in hand under the cover of fog and mist
As lovers do we kissed a kiss that I still feel
It is the only one that to me has ever felt real
The only one where I felt more than just our lips
The only one in which there was no need for air
A kiss that set our hearts to race and stopped all time
A kiss that left us its trace
A haunting sweet taste and your hand upon my face
A kiss that was like our love so fair
All it needed was for us to be there
Knowing that in that moment, I was yours and you mine
And that for always we would be
Needing one another like the flowers, rain and shine
In that perfect scene, that dream I was dreaming
I felt a surreal like state of being
As I felt the sweet strains of our union
When we became the same, for the first time
We became one
We were no longer just two souls overcastting
We were one warming this cold universe
We were souls with purpose
Mine is you and yours mine
We were souls in the moment of our birth
Unblemished like stars in a dark night time sky
This is how I want us to always be
I want us to shine our light for the entire world to see
I want us to be for all eternal in our unity
A tear burns this paper now don’t ask me how or why**
Can the warmth in these words be too much?
For this white canvas to bear its touch
It is too much for me
So I must say to you good night and that I
Will Always Love you
Love you for loving me
Love you for being you
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Re: Unblemished like stars
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:08:00 AM AEST
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Very good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Unblemished like stars
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:08:50 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: Unblemished like stars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:11:38 AM AEST
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From the heart and just beautiful
Leia |
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Re: Unblemished like stars
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:25:44 AM AEST
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"We were one warming this cold universe
We were souls with purpose
Mine is you and yours mine"
I really do just love this poem, this is one of my favorites, it left me speechless in all of it's feeling and imagery, beautiful and elegantly written. mmmuuuaaawww |
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Re: Unblemished like stars
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 05:36:24 AM AEST
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John you have such a beautiful way of pour out your heart. This is has to be the best poem I have read from you. This was wrote with so much love.
I feel these lines so much
Can the warmth in these words be too much?
For this white canvas to bear its touch
It is too much for me
I am I filled with the feelings from these words. It has made me miss my man that bit more but for good reasons....
love you john
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