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I Wish I Could Make You Happy
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:52:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wish
I could
make you
happy
I always
seem to fail
it makes
me feel
so worthless
should life
be this
pointless
am I
as horrible
as I
tend to
always feel
should I
be this
empty
should I
feel so
alone
sometimes
i wonder
if you
want me
if you
see me
do you
need me
am I
really alive
Copyright ©
MDodgen
... [
2005-06-07 00:52:58]
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Re: I Wish I Could Make You Happy
(User Rating: 1 )
by xdeadxdollyx on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:29:43 AM AEST
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| I REALLY like this poem!! :) |
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Re: I Wish I Could Make You Happy
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:20:40 PM AEST
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a touching emotional write great jobn
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Re: I Wish I Could Make You Happy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 08:41:05 PM AEST
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So many questions of the heart, a poem of uncertainty, i like this poem but not the sadness yet you face the reality of wanting to know, yet so sad that love seems to always be on trial. don't put your self down, one who is willing to give all in love is one who is most
worthy of love to begin with. *****
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