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Wake
Contributed by
Dakota
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Wake up
Think
Get ready
weep
Leave home
sheep
Arrive there
Hide
Stay away
Run
They are here
Stunned
I will go in
Weep
Then i will leave
Think
Sleep
Copyright ©
Dakota
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2005-06-06 23:19:58]
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Re: Wake
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:40:15 PM AEST
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| Bravo, Short but with such intense pain here,I can relate to it, feelings similar to this ran through me when my mom passed.I am terribly sorry for you and your family's loss.To loose loved ones is like loosing the will to breathe.Such a painful write my heart goes out to you. |
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Re: Wake
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:57:47 AM AEST
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That about sums up the lack of feelings. You feel like a programmed robot for a few days. People say eat, you eat. They say sit, you sit. It is just the mind trying to absorb the horrid shock. We get through it but it is a difficult time. My condolensces to you and the family.
Rita |
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Re: Wake
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:57:07 PM AEST
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Very nice write...Sad and very tense...God Bless!
Take care |
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