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Love... Stinks
Contributed by
Serendippitty
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:14:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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What in the world is wrong with me?
How can I be so dumb...
To sit here and wallow
and crush on all these bums
How can I be such a loser
wasting all my time
thinking romantic thoughts
even making rhymes
All this bull***** that I dreamed about
makes me want to gag
To purge my soul of foolish love
And seal it in a bag
No one is worth obsessing over
or worth even these words
To think Ive wasted energy and feelings
on all those stupid turds.
When looking back upon my life
I wondered why I loved those saps
And spent my life crushing on them,
those incessant pieces of crap
Surely now
I was just too stupid
I hate love
Goddamn you Cupid...
Go stick your arrow into someone else's ***
and stay away from mine
Because screw love dammit
Im gonna do just fine
Copyright ©
Serendippitty
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2005-06-06 23:14:36]
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Re: Love... Stinks
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:20:06 PM AEST
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| haha i like this very much...i sense a lot of anger in this poem & i guess you have been hurt in the way of love. but i too very much can relate to your sarcastic feelings, love hurts a lot & u can screw you up |
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Re: Love... Stinks
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:23:23 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of wisdom.
I can tottaly relate.
after a nearly 6 year break I'm ready to jump back in.
Luv your sense of humor.
keep writing as u r a pro.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Love... Stinks
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by Triple on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:57:17 PM AEST
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| I can feel your pain. I like the way you wrote about your pain. Keep writting it will help you out. I am sorry for what was done to you. |
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