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What Happens When You Love Your Best friend
Contributed by
c2b6s
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Six days, highschool is over.
I promise to never see you again.
Most people spend this week saying goodbye.
To people I would hardly call friends.
Oh but i wish you the best in life.
Get everything you deserve.
I hate you so much that it hurts.
I keep trying to put myself in your place, why would you do this to me.
The way you whispered those lies, how foolish i was to believe.
I believed i loved you, you fooled me into thinking you cared.
Now that you're gone, I believe I've never been so scared.
We were meant to be together, you know.
Its been four years now and I still refuse to let you go.
But i'm simply 17, and you've broken my heart more times than there are stars in the sky.
This is the last time you leave my life in pieces, goodbye my bestfriend, goodbye.
You know I can't forgive you
I know you won't forget.
The way the moon seemed to dance on the night that we first met.
You know i've created my own ocean, simply from the tears you've made me cry
Now that there stands this massive sea between us, goodbye my bestfriend, goodbye.
You were everything
How could you do this to me
I can't breathe
I can't breathe...
Without you.
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c2b6s
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2005-06-06 22:17:06]
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Re: What Happens When You Love Your Best friend
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:56:15 PM AEST
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awesome poem... i can so relate to it. i especially liked the part about the moon on the nite you met, and about the tears with the ocean... you made great uses of words and descriptions very very nice
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Re: What Happens When You Love Your Best friend
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:34:40 PM AEST
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oh i can relate to this so much!!! ur poem did deeply touch my heart and i do know much it does hurt when your love betrays or leaves you alone. when you saying goodbye it made my eyes swell up with tears for i cant handle goodbyes, this was a very emotional poem
well done and i do apprecaite your honesty
all the best for you X |
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