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as everything fits into my disguise
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:53:15 PM in AEST
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love to truth is lost with lies
as everything fits into my disguise
I falter slowly to pain
everything happening quickly in vain
a lover's betrayal wrapped up in words
evry sound creeks without having heard
being cautious and seeming sencere
what once was love; is a lustful spear
sleep with one eye open; fingers crossed
hoping that what is found, yurned to be lost
a destiny made of hate
a lonely desire of losing fate
everyhting becomes just another lie
what could happen in the event of my demise
what is here, can never be there
so what is lonely, is always scared
feeling you breathe on my body sight
fels so intense and feels so right
every mouth spreads to cries
as everything fits into my disguise
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Re: as everything fits into my disguise
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:58:12 PM AEST
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| yes the confusion of Love, explained all to well, and why I've been single for 2 years, LOL! Good write! |
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Re: as everything fits into my disguise
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:40:51 PM AEST
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beautiful poetry, i do love your word use & i enjoyed reading this piece
keep it up! ;) |
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Re: as everything fits into my disguise
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:50:45 PM AEST
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very enigmatic write..
your work always leaves me to wonder
about what I may be hiding myself..
great write
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