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TRAITS DELECTABLE
Contributed by
SidneyCid
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:18:02 PM in AEST
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June 6, 2005
TRAITS DELECTABLE
The girls are feministic which
Compels them showy be,
And glamour of their body show
For all the world to see.
An inborn trait sensational
That quite delights the male,
For feministic attributes
Grows never for them stale.
Their legs with skimpy mini-skirts
Are grandily displayed,
And for divulging grandeur quite,
The low-cut blouse is made.
And on the beach, O mercy me!
The wardrobe is but string,
And all is there for all to see,
And all is ravishing.
And it is shown with not a blush,
But verily with pride,
Though be it quite delightful or
Exceptionally wide.
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Copyright ©
SidneyCid
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2005-06-06 21:18:02]
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Re: TRAITS DELECTABLE
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:40:43 PM AEST
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Dear Dalton,
I can't believe my eyes. I commented on this poem once, and when I got here, it had a big zero!
Who is eating my comments do you know?
I said earlier, that the ladies of my day were far more wise! For they left much for the imagination! Ahhhhhhhhh the imagination for a man can be so much better than the real thing! Teehee
Great Write.......very delectable indeed!
Warm Poetic Love
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Re: TRAITS DELECTABLE
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 01:12:05 AM AEST
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i think girls/women these days need to learn just a tad more self respect. I like your poem though.
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Re: TRAITS DELECTABLE
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:33:34 PM AEST
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beautifully written. although i agree with what you have said i disagree that all females of this generation are bareing themselfs. i am only 22 and compleately cover myself with clotheing. however i will agree that i am probibly the only one who does.
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Re: TRAITS DELECTABLE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 05:17:12 PM AEST
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i truly enjoyed reading this.
well done, |
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