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Hate, fate, truth, and lies
Contributed by
SmokinJoeEvil
on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My tears through my veins,
And blood from my eyes.
Laid fallow the fields of the heart.
The end of the truth
And the start of the lies,
Worlds of light torn darkly apart.
When hate steals the soul
No peace brings it back.
With loathing I dare speak the name.
The last time still near.
The demon in black.
My memory certain my shame.
My weakness too great.
One wound and I'd fall.
No wish nor dream to make mend.
A tribute to fate,
And reminder of all
The things that truly don't end.
Copyright ©
SmokinJoeEvil
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2003-01-03 20:00:00]
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:02:27 PM AEST
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Wow... the first two lines were just amazing I liked this a lot and can't find anything else to say...
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by EmSal on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:08:05 PM AEST
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| I read this poem and thought I'd comment on it cause I did like it. Keep up the great writing. |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by Fwog on
Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 11:23:16 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write, love the line
"Laid fallow the fields of the heart" sensational line.
You've got the goods, looking forward to more from you
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by venkat on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:48:09 AM AEST
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| " my tears...no peace bring it back"..these six lines breath takingly beautiful. A billiant writing..Venkat |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:23:23 AM AEST
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| A good write....and when i get angry isnt a mistake......especially when the person hurts me............:-) |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by Mystery_Girl on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 07:23:28 AM AEST
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| A good write....and when i get angry isnt a mistake......especially when the person hurts me............:-) |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by dreamweave18 on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:18:38 PM AEST
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| My heart feels this ache right now. Thanks for helping me let a little bit of it out! |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by DarylLew151 on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 09:13:55 PM AEST
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| Wow, Shakespear Meets Poe. I think i'm gonna have to read your other things now. |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:02:44 AM AEST
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| I just wanted to tell you that i thought your poem was very good, and i look forward to reading more of your work! |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 01:05:39 PM AEST
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| That line is one of my favorites! Unfortunately good metaphors like this seem to elude me more than they tend to seek me out. Thank you for your comment. |
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Re: Hate, fate, truth, and lies
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by Stitch on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:29:56 PM AEST
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Splendid! BRAVO!
Stitch |
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