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Finest Moment
Contributed by
SimplySammixl3
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:51:14 PM in AEST
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Heart break at its finest,
brings all of us to shame,
when all along,
we knew love's just a silly game.
Heart break at its finest,
makes every girl look dumb,
makes every girl feel,
her heart's gone numb.
Heart break at its finest,
leaves girls with painful scars,
looking up and realizing that he's,
further than the stars.
Heart break at its finest,
Is the main reason why,
There are so many tears,
that she cries.
Heart break at its finest,
brings all of us to shame,
when all along,
we knew love's just a silly game.
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SimplySammixl3
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Re: Finest Moment
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by shelby on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:21:26 PM AEST
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nicely expressed I hope you dont cry to long some guys just arent even worth it!
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Re: Finest Moment
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 12:35:44 PM AEST
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I like how your poem reads--sooosmooth,but I diagree that love is just a silly game.It is most retching to have your heart torn out when yo truly love a person and they reject you.
Nice write though.
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