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Simply Put
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jaycee
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:48:24 PM in AEST
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Simply put
she brightens my day
she banishes my doubts
I want to stay
Simply put
she is the sweetest thing
I look forward to chat
and for my cell to ring
Simply put
I want to go to the midwest
and spend quality time
with the gal who is best*
Simply put
flicks with correlian smuggler
I'd watch with her while
I snuggle with her*
Simply put
her voice is music to my ears
her name means sweet melody
she has dried my tears
Simply put
she's my princess in white
while we gaze at the stars
lighting up the night
Simply put
she's my raison d'etre
and the best of friends
we will be forever
* maybe not now, but when the time is right :)
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jaycee
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Re: Simply Put
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 04:24:41 PM AEST
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Simply put, this is extremely sweet and I hopw that time comes very soon.
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Re: Simply Put
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:59:28 PM AEST
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Awww how sweet! Love blooms on YPDC. Nice write, and good luck!
Scorp. |
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Re: Simply Put
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:22:59 PM AEST
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Awww Jaycee, this may have been simply put, but it was well said!!! I do wish you and Kara all the best.... I love this!!!!
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Re: Simply Put
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:41:56 PM AEST
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aww thats so sweet! she must be quite the lady to have u impressed! i wish u the best of luck! i told u if u waited sumone would cum for u!
jennie* xXx |
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Re: Simply Put
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by GingerB on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:30:10 PM AEST
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Lucky lady, this Kara.
Lovely poem.
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Re: Simply Put
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 11:17:50 PM AEST
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Awww ((((((((((Jaycee )))))))))))))))),
You just brightened my whole week, put a perminant smile on my face and touched my heart , I love this This is beautiful and I think you might be an angel !!!! Thankyou for being so wonderful
xxxoooLeia |
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Re: Simply Put
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by Wandering-Soul on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:06:18 PM AEST
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