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Thought You Knew?
Contributed by
Dying_angel
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:52:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm trying to voice my thoughts
But I cannot speak
Can't you see I'm helpless...
...frail and weak?
Of course you know,
How could you not?
I'm dying as I live,
My insides rot
A sharp intake of breath,
Did you not realise?
That all that you know,
Was merely a disguise?
Every little thing,
All I've said to you
My god...
If only you knew...
Copyright ©
Dying_angel
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2005-06-06 14:52:36]
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Re: Thought You Knew?
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:58:38 PM AEST
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we all hide behind masks to some degree or another..
great write..I like it
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Re: Thought You Knew?
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by enamat on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:07:09 PM AEST
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| i like it too. specially the way your short verses explain everything so clear. |
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Re: Thought You Knew?
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 06:02:21 PM AEST
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Nicely expressed! I enjoyed this.
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