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I Want You To Be Happy..
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:49:13 PM in AEST
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Yesterday I found some more razors
And it was hard to resist
But I made you a promise
That I wouldn't cut over this
Youre probably getting mad now
But before you start to yell
Please just let me speak
Don't damn me to hell
Im scared of losing you
And scared of being this close
But you saying you love me
When you don't hurts the most
I know you still love her
And with that Im fine
If youre happy, then Im happy
But I still want you as mine..
When you got your last taste
I wasn't at all mad
But I cried my little eyes out
With everything I had
I'll continue to love you
Until my last days
I'll try to be strong
No matter what it takes
So remember me now
Please..forget me never
Because In my heart
I'll be your little kitten forever
Copyright ©
Daniels_Princess
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2005-06-06 14:49:13]
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Re: I Want You To Be Happy..
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:01:59 PM AEST
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dont hurt yourself anymore than you already have been princess..
my heart bleeds for ya..
much happiness to you friend..
great write
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Re: I Want You To Be Happy..
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:24:30 PM AEST
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nice poem,but u shouldn't hurt urself.trust me if ur in need of hurting urslef then maybe hes not worth it.i dont mean to sound selfish but a relationship should never be a 1 way only,if u let this go on forever he will take advantage of it,and in a line u said "When you got your last taste"sounds like he had cheated on u,that just tells me that he doesnt respect u,it sucks loving someone who doesnt love u back,good luck with this,keep up the great writes!!!
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Re: I Want You To Be Happy..
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by Sinned on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 04:24:30 PM AEST
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Daniels_Princess
Leave it be. If he's not happy being with you he never will be.
Without trust in each other there is nothing.
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Re: I Want You To Be Happy..
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:13:19 PM AEST
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Darling I wouldn't cry over any man who isn't in to you!! This is a good write and you really expressed yourself well, but don't hurt yourself mentally OR physically for ANYONE.
Take Care.
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