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Contributed by PommeDeSang3 on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:15:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sucked into a world of darkness, lost and never to be found…
Blind and deaf staggering about unknown territory...
Jagged Edge Mountains, scoot black sky, claw like trees
Burnt, uneven ground before my feet.
A barren land of death and pain….
Lost never to be rescued or release…
Cursed to wonder the desert lands for my life…
Never to reach the the world on the other side,
The one that mockingly sits before my eyes.
A land of tranquility and beauty
Forbidden for me to enter and,
My presence unwanted in that world...
That is a world not meant for me…
A world I will never know...
A world I am not suppose to know...
Hopelessly I wonder the never ending hell
One I know so fondly,
A place in which I created
Somewhere in the depths of my mind that takes me captive from time to time.
A place that reminds me of my mistakes, misfortunes and pains I have felt.
Never to be freed
Never to escape
Always going to revisit this place…
This place where I am abandoned and forgotten...

Copyright Â© PommeDeSang3 ... [ 2005-06-06 13:15:17]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:24:04 PM AEST
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Ah, ma cheri petite! You have posted, it's been a while! lol. Heart-wrenching, filled with undying sorrow and despair.. I truly hope you do not feel this way, 'Lex. :*( Your 'voice' is maturing, the flow is becoming more graceful, and your word choice in total has grown to incredible heights! Beautiful cheri!! Loved this! Hoping you'll grace us with your lovely words once more. I enjoyed this, although, my heart questions if this pain you write of is real... or just expressions for the sake of poetry? Hoping all is well, sweetie. All my love, douce amie. Forever and always,

Your dearest friend/ most avid fan,

Stephy!! ~*Ma Amie*~

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