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Tears on the soul
Contributed by
little_genna
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:01:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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An old habit, a twisted thirst,
Being wanted, such a curse.
Scars on the body, tears on the soul,
An old habit, losing control.
All this, was an illusion,
Can you see, through this confusion.
This happiness, now a shattered image,
Confusion, pain and hate, the cause of damage.
Old habit, twisted thirst,
Such a curse,
Tears on the soul,
Losing control.
Walked away, when needed,
Didn’t think you cared, so scared.
Confusion and pain,
Caused nasty bloodstains.
Old habit, a twisted thirst,
Such a curse,
Tears on the soul,
Losing control.
Tears on the soul,
Losing control.
Tears on the soul,
Lost control.
SJ
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2005-06-06 13:01:23]
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Re: Tears on the soul
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by Mangs on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:10:12 PM AEST
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wow.....theres so much hurt there....and ive never seen anyone express it this way....u had me moved....
love always... |
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Re: Tears on the soul
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by heartless_soul on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 06:20:34 PM AEST
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"I dont know why you are apologizing for."
this was truly an emotional poem if was well writen and full of imagery of suffering from pain, I did like the way you closed the poem, I do hope that you are doing better, I will pray that you will never feel like this. Be well
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Re: Tears on the soul
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by gmcse8 on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 01:45:51 PM AEST
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| short comment, very thought provoking, sorta ***** me off though, read it at work while i was eating lunch, got so engrossed, my soup got cold, your fault. Hate cold soup........ bob |
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