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My Pain
Contributed by
FigurelessShadow
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:33:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Pain...
She stares at me,
It burns,
She smiles at me,
I cry,
She talks to me,
I worry,
She walks past me,
I feel safe again,
But somehow sad,
Her alltogether beauty is,
Irresistable,
But deady,
Pain...
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2005-06-06 12:33:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by DynamicX on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:11:35 PM AEST (User
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does she feel the same pain at the sight of you? Go talk to her! ... nice poem |
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Re: My Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:08:12 PM AEST (User
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Very dark and freestylin'... i liked it and have felt the same every now and then...Keep up the good writing! dw |
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