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She's bound by her beauty
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:45:20 AM in AEST
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She's bound by her beauty
a rose in a vase
smiling's a duty
when looks are what's all
Thorns of her history
make barbed wire skin
the roots of her misery
keep sunshine at bay
She's a red petal
soft in the sun
but cold like cold metal
i can't keep her warm
Dark leaves despair
when there's nothing there
not a breeze of her life
can move through the air...
...She's bound by her beauty
dw
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Re: She's bound by her beauty
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:52:10 AM AEST
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How very nice! I like the way you wrote this, good description.
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Re: She's bound by her beauty
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:21:18 PM AEST
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wow. i really like what you did here. i especially love the lines
"Thorns of her history
make barbed wire skin"
thats such a creative way to explain it.
great job! keep writing. |
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Re: She's bound by her beauty
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by FigurelessShadow on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:07:44 AM AEST
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| It's really good, nice descriptions. And if its real then U'r lucky to know someone like that. |
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Re: She's bound by her beauty
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:39:56 PM AEST
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You pen her pain so well. Beauty is not always an asset. Hopefully one day she can throw off that gauntlet and smile with beauty and gladness from her heart.
smiles,
Rita |
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