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the end
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:17:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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When life's so bad
you want to die,
you plan your death everyday.
you sit around
and wonder why
things ever got this way
you wonder how it got so bad
so hard to live
to stay
to stay in this world
so mean, so cruel
that you want to pass away.
when you're so caught up
you don't even care,
whats on the other side
all you can do is sit on the floor
and cry, and cry,
and cry.
you no longer have control
over what you say
or do.
theres so much pain and grief
and anguish,
you don't know where to start.
there cant possibly be
enough love in this world
to mend your broken heart
you contemplate the many ways
the slow, the quick,
the painless.
everything is ready now,
your heart is beating fast.
you want to get it over with,
but the courage you cannot grasp.
you try and try
to do the deed,
but you've lost
all sense of time
you try and try
to get it done
but you cant
commit the crime
you doubt your line of thinking
is the choice you're making right?
maybe you should put it off
do it tomorrow night.
you only want to stop the pain
make it go away
you don't want to have to end it this way,
but you fell you have no choice.
you don't want to have to leave today,
but you know you have no choice.
its almost over
you think to yourself,
just one more
and you're gone.
your best friend calls you
as your body hits the floor.
you fade away into darkness,
darkness,
the end.
Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
Copyright ©
bethers_is_my_baby
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2005-06-06 08:17:57]
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Re: the end
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:28:00 AM AEST
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Wow...heavy hitting poem. This was written really well, and I'm glad to hear this is past tense. Good job.
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Re: the end
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 01:19:36 AM AEST
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| great write, well done |
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Re: the end
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:42:13 AM AEST
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I know where you're coming from and I loved it! Awesome right, sucks that you had to go to the loony bin :p I got out of it haha.. yeah great write keep it up.
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