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You used to hide
Contributed by
Streamingdreams
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:19:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tie around
Just stay awhile
Fit those beautiful story
Close abound
Just wrap around
Cover up all those faults
When will you let loose
Throw away all the tools
You used to hide
When will you face up towards
The things you've done
The dirts
You used to hide
Sew up the gaps
The tighter the better the flaps
Throw sand in the hole
As long as it's close
We will never know
Getiing tired of you
Getting quietly sick of you
Who'd you think you are
You can't go that far
You know?
Stop hidin' now.
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Streamingdreams
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2005-06-06 01:19:43]
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Re: You used to hide
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:19:55 AM AEST
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Wow.. i'm not sure what exactly drew me in..but, it was really good!! I"m especially fond of..
When will you let loose
throw away all the tools
you use to hide.
very nice! and Keep up the good work...dw |
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Re: You used to hide
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by Chaser on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:30:42 PM AEST
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| thats good stuff, i like it a lot |
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