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tonight ..tomarrow and forever..
Contributed by
wild_girl121
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:40:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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as tears drop down her face
she cries herself to sleep tonight
not knowing how to stop
or how to take back what she did...
she lies awake tonight
thinking of how bad she
screwed up, she tried not to
but it still happens.
faking happiness everyday
at school gets her by
on black and white.
wishing she could change the past
but she cant , it just slowly takes her
feelings of comfort away.
time better pass faster , she
is only getting by on black and white ....
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2005-06-06 00:40:25]
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Re: tonight ..tomarrow and forever..
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:18:05 AM AEST
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wild_girl121
I didn't know what to make of your poem.
Like what happen ?
What is the problem ?
What is te struggle ?
I was lost to the happening.
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Re: tonight ..tomarrow and forever..
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by tears_of_blood on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:18:12 PM AEST
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good poem really strong words put in it hope it wokrs out with what ever is going on.
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