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Good-bye
Contributed by
twisted_dreams
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:23:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Today is the day
That I stand next to you
Telling you good-bye
And good luck with everything you do
You were there
When I needed to cry
When my spirits needed a lift
And when I needed a smile to get by
You were the reason
I woke up every day
The reason I actually tried
And the reason I looked that way
Now its time
For you to leave me
And all you’re other friends
The way you will be missed you won’t ever see
We have one last time
To make the memories real
So that they never fade away
Even with a worn out seal
I want you to know
That we will always be here
Waiting for you
To make everything clear
Things will never be the same
With you not in our sight
But we will make it through
And everything will be alright.
Copyright ©
twisted_dreams
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2005-06-05 22:23:44]
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Re: Good-bye
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:32:25 PM AEST
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this is a sad write and one that made me cry because i really hate goodbye
but very touching and honest, you did a great job
may he R.I.P |
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Re: Good-bye
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:00:13 PM AEST
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It's sad yet has deep beauty.
It's a masterpeice.
it's awesome and very moving.
it shows that u aren't a selfish person and that is one good traite to have.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Good-bye
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by givingin on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:52:56 AM AEST
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Sad write, but uplifting all at the same time.
Great write.
*~givingin~* |
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