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Lie to Yourself
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:44:14 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Lie to Yourself
You deny the truth,
And the venom of lies
Poisons you
Till you bleed from your eyes.
I hope you finally see
What you've denied,
But you bleed profusely
With unanswered whys.
To say that my hate
Is subliminal
Is a lie that fades
To be criminal.
To see you outlined in blood
Is one of my fantasies
That's no longer enough
But will be a reality.
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Essentially9
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by shelby on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:55:55 PM AEST
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raw very deep I felt your anger are you ok??
Michelle |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:00:30 PM AEST
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awesome write!! i like that you got the anger out and out well, too. good job. and i know this is what my ex-best friend must be saying. that he fantasised me dead... well, his wish is almost true. keep up the good work!!
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:05:30 PM AEST
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Nicely spewed! Full of venom and I love it. The third stanza rocks, and the ending is the icing on the cake...Excellent.
Scorp. |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:57:15 PM AEST
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| you stile my line...venom of a lie...thats not right |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:58:36 PM AEST
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Think of your own next time ok hun...
since you say your so great
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:25:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful Jen, amazing and just well, DARK AND ANGERY hehe
~Clark |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:43:03 AM AEST
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Wow aren't you ******d. I liked this very dark and pottent.
I agree with Jarred your extremly gifted in writing. Pls teach me how lol.
Nicely done again Jessen (Did i say that right?)
Jane xoxo |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by Jimmato on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:17:37 AM AEST
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| gritty, viscious and all together lovely. This one was pretty hardcore |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by Willofree on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 10:49:41 PM AEST
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A lot of anger expressed in a very vivid and graphic manner. But angry fantasy's are often a healthy release for angry emotions.
You certainly are not indifferent....
A powerful write, thanks for sharing
Will
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 06:28:46 AM AEST
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Jenn??
Definately full of anger, but...but, I have to disagree with some of the other comments, tho this is good, very good!, I get the feeling you rushed a bit, (cause you were angry?) I just have the feeling after reading so much of your works that this could have been better.
Always a fan of yours, don't forget me when you're famous!!!
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by xXcrossedXx on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:59:35 AM AEST
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How creative written with hidden meaning, very deep. Great write.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Lie to Yourself
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by midian on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 07:28:37 AM AEST
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| I Found the waves of anger from this poem were so well put across. i particulally like the ending, i can relate to this a lot a antastic write |
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